The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
The chart bar illustrates the diverse ways of spending spare time by children in Australia. It depicts comparison the activities preferred by boys and girls.
Overall, the percentage of girls engaged in various activities does not outnumbered those time spending by boys by a significant margin. While all interests were relatively similar between the sexes, there was some variance, especially in watching tv or videos where the percentage of both trends was the highest.
With regards to skateboarding and rollerblading, the percentage of girls interested in it was the smallest, reaching approximately 21%. For boys, the trajectory was less poor, the percentage of children engaged in arts and craft was at its lowest level at 38%.
In addition, the interest of both sexes includes bike riding and electronic or computer games, the percentage of boys have doing either riding and playing games nearby at 78-80; meanwhile the fraction of girls interested in them was only 58-60%. Among all leisures watching tv and videos took 100% of young one's time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37869822485 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87706643851 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5246285445 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716316105054 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418291529471 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465653928033 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533711871196 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480368899645 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.