The graph below show the amount spend by teenagers on the fast food in britain . The units are amount spends is pounds per week in the first figure income group grams per week in the secound figer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e graph reveals the fast food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...food in britain . It is clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 a...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... clear hamburgers . Fish chips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collabo...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hips and pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gr...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'collaborated'.
Suggestion: collaborated
...pizza . The years 1970 and 1985 . It is collaborate pound per week and gram per week. ...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orate pound per week and gram per week. It can be seen that high income it is in...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...me it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased fini...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...it is increased and 50 per week pound . However in fish chips it decreased finished tha...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ecreased finished that 30 per week pound . Whereever pizza it is well down in and ...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... exchanced finished at 200 per week gram . But in 1985 in hamburgers and that is d...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and that is down up 205 per week gram. Overall it is amount aways the spend and...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Overall it is amount aways the spend and tangerous on the fish chips food in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, secondly, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 591.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10416666667 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05005131825 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451388888889 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 160.2 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6105314737 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.25 112.824112599 44% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441648169918 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174787018907 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131493943365 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356202939478 0.15604864568 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516765171583 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 101.59 61.2550243902 166% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 10.3012195122 20% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.61 11.4140731707 49% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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