The table below gives information on internet use in six categories by age group . Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate .
The given line graph revels information about the six categories by age group . It clear is internet user . Which is colaborate in respectively .
It can be seen that in internet use in six categories by age group . In the first is get new it decreased and internet user 76 . However in online game with teens increases and internet user 81 . Wherever in buying a product it decreases and internet user 43 . In 20s in online game decreases internet user 53 . Whenever in searching for people this decreased added at internet user 31 . In 50s in online games it fell down finished at 25 internet user . But in buying a project this is down up and internet user 67 . Wherever in 70s in online game it decreased and internet user 32 . However project reserch it fell up in added at internet user 70 . But in seraching for people it increases and internet user 27 .
Overall it internet user as get news high income increases and it searching for people it decreases in internet user .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61271676301 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63314527735 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445086705202 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3521747271 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.2 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5333333333 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146705364945 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725232000793 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824969292636 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135432804105 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779015498279 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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