The graph below show the population of the population aged 50 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

Essay topics:

The graph below show the population of the population aged 50 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The given line graph illustrates, the information about the percentage of peoples who were aged 65 and over in three different nations namely USA, Sweden as well as Japan from 1940 to 2040.

After analysing, it can be clearly seen that in 1940, the percentile of USA's population over 65 age and over was almost 9%. It rose by 1% in 1960. From 1960 to 1980, it increased by 50% whereas it decreased by 2% in 2000. The proportion of USA's public was same in 2020 and in 2040 it will increase approximately 23%. In 1940 to 1960, sweden's population was almost 6% and 8% respectively. Around 40% population was in 1980, when it increased 15% in 2000 and decrease 18% in 2020. In 2040 the population will reach at 25.

The line graph further collate that the Japan population was 5% in 1940 and between 1960 to 1980 declined and identical. However, in 2008 rose by 5%. 2020 again it increased 5%, after that it will sharply increase in 2040 and it will approximately 27%.

Overall it is evident that the Japan's population percentage will be the highest as compared to USA and Sweden whereas the lowest percentage of USA in given time.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57352941176 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62991452403 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7547006281 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294662944511 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106117937668 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854847998825 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169708746618 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688249719813 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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