The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 to 2005.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 to 2005.

The graph illustrated the comparison of amount of money for spent on books between Germany, France, and Austria from 1995 to 2005. Overall, throughout 1995 to 2005 Germany is the most country which it spent its money more than 80 million us dollars per year for purchasing books. On the other hand, during 1995 to 2001 Austria was the lowest as caused it just purchased books between 30 to 40 million us dollars per year.

Furthermore, France was positioned as the second rank that since 1995 to 2005 it purchased books more than 50 million us dollars per year. On the other hand, over 1995 to 2003 Italy was the third rank that it spent 50 million us dollars per year minimally. However, during 2003 to 2005 Italy was positioned as the fourth rank as caused of since 2001 to 2005 Austria uplifted its amount of money for purchasing books significantly, attained up to 60 million us dollars in 2005.

On the other hand, during 1995 to 2005 while the number of purchasing books of Germany tend to fluctuate unexpectedly, France lean to increased slightly, Italy tend to decreased from 1997 to 1999 and increased slightly again.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Italy) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...rance lean to increased slightly, Italy tend to decreased from 1997 to 1999 and incr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75126903553 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49314554157 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441624365482 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.432357218 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345267130845 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204981255739 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172173517816 0.0843802449381 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237674511751 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115902381654 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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