The graph below shows annual cinema admissions by age in the UK
Illustrated in the line graph is information concerning the annual range of cinema attendances, split by age groups in Great Britain over the period of 12 years (1997-2009).
Overall, while the number of adolescents going to movie theaters witnessed a plateau, people aged 25-34 underwent a decline in terms of cinema admissions, and a rise was recorded in those from 35 to over 45 throughout the given timeframe.
Appropos 15-24 year-old figure, the rate of moviegoers witnessed a marginal decrease in the first one year, followed by a five-year period of stability at around 55-60 million people. This category then experienced a relative fluctuation from 2004 to 2007, before going back to the starting point of approximately 60 million by 2009.
Starting at 40 million in 1997, the number of cinema attendances who aged between 25 and 34 stayed constant until the period 2002-2004 when it was exactly the peak period for moviegoers from 25 to 34. Unfortunately, this figure showed a plunge in 2005 and levelled off at about 30 million. Both 35-44 age group and over-45 one began at 20 million of film watchers. While the former reached a peak of 10 million by 2002 before slightly declining and standing at 25 million in 2009, an intense upsurge to around 40 million was recorded in the latter, which helped to change its position with the rate of 35-44 year-old moviegoers at the end of the surveyed period.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92468619247 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75739519017 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598326359833 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9238710462 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.125 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105641338228 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546081437171 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060118161728 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817556349248 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705286272206 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.