The definition of success
People have different views about the meaning of success. While it is considered by some that success is defined by material possessions, I still advocate the opinion that knowledge is the driving force behind a successful person.
There are several reasons why people might argue that material possessions measure success. First and foremost, since people own a huge property, they can ensure a stable life. In contrast, those who are not well-off have to earn their livings under poor circumstances. This may prevent people from pursuing their dream to become a successful person. Secondly, it is no secret that as people are wealthy and have hight status in the society, they are usually respected by others. For instance, a CEO of a firm is typical of a successful individual due to his position in workplace as well as appreciation from employees.
In spite of the above arguments, I strongly support the view that knowledge makes a great contribution to the definition of success. The main point is that a solid grasp of specific fields helps individuals to reach their full potentials. In doing so, people must obtain skills and expertise so that they can utilize those factors in a practical way. As an illustration, people will be given more chances to opt for their future occupation as a result of an elaborated understanding of the job market demands. In my point of view, it is important for them to find a job that both suits their desire and meets the need of the market. A dream career will easily lead to success.
In brief, sometimes success should be measured by material factors, but from my perspective, knowledge is the deciding element of a successful individual in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, in brief, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91349480969 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80954369204 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6117003072 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286886362156 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940306359376 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974394590864 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179576391888 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474095755743 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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