The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 to 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied linear schedule delineates the information about, per person releasing carbon dioxide in countries such as: United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during 1967 to 2007. The data is calibrated in metric tonnes.

To commence with, it is been seen that, people in United Kingdom did emission of 11 metric tonnes in year 1967 and after that the emission of people slightly declined untill the year 2007. Further more, citizens of Portugal were releasing carbon dioxide with the rapid incline from 1 to 5 metric tonnes in the year 1967 to 1997, but in the year 1997 to 2007 emission was constant.

Probing ahead, it is noticed that, dwellers of Italy were having sluggish increase in emissions of carbon dioxide from the year 1967 to 2007. Moreover, people of Sweden had fluctuating discharge of carbon dioxide, from the year 1967 to 1977 it inclined and after that from year 1977 to 2007 emissions constantly declined.

Overall, it is evident that, maximum number of ejection of carbon dioxide was by the people of united Kingdom and the minimum emission was by people living in Portugal in all the given years.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96315789474 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37874358699 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2680033087 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271712093589 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139923153336 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912406592366 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185763998179 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641904754116 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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