The line graph compares the amount of average regularly income of the Japanese and the prices of two kinds of television including colour and white and black TV over a twenty-year period from 1953 to 1973.
Overall,there was a downward trend in the prices of different types of TV, whereas the remaining category saw a contrasting movement over the given period.
It is clear that there was only an appearance of white and black TV in the first year of period with the price standing at roughly 200 thousand Yen. After ten years, color TV emerged and also had a same price with the black and white TV in 1953. The money that people paid for the former went down significantly to 100 thousand Yen in 1963,and then continued its downward trend more slightly to just over 50 thousand Yen in the last year. Meanwhile, the period from 1963 to 1973 witnessed a considerably drop of 100 thousand Yen in the price of the latter.
By contrast, the average amount of monthly earnings started at just under 50 thousand Yen in 1953, followed by a sharp increase of approximately 100 thousand Yen in 1968. After that, it continued its upward trend more remarkably and reached the peak at around 200 thousand Yen in the last period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
... the period from 1963 to 1973 witnessed a considerably drop of 100 thousand Yen in the price of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55890816051 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.0713558335 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233959992138 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116658130722 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799199074489 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151746577757 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905963829778 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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