The line graph illustrates the changes in the number of British citizens travelled by three different modes of transport such as car,train and bus over a period of 60 years from 1970 to 2030.
Overall, car is the most popular method of travel by them in the given time frame. Although bus was the second preferred choice of transportation at the beginning of the year and it then declined at the final year.
In the graph it is observed that,almost 5 million people use car to travel in 1970, then it gradually increased over the given years. it is predicted that it will increase and reach the peak of 9 million at the final year. surprisingly,around 4 million people travelled by bus until 2010. Then the number of bus travellers over took by the train passengers, which was the least preferred mode of transport from 1970 to 2010.It is anticipated that following years people will use train as their convenient travelling method as compared to bus.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed by three different modes of transport such as car,train and bus over a period ...
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...ifferent modes of transport such as car,train and bus over a period of 60 years from ...
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...ear. In the graph it is observed that,almost 5 million people use car to travel in 1...
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...adually increased over the given years. it is predicted that it will increase and ...
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Suggestion: Surprisingly
...he peak of 9 million at the final year. surprisingly,around 4 million people travelled by b...
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... million at the final year. surprisingly,around 4 million people travelled by bus unti...
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...n at the final year. surprisingly,around 4 million people travelled by bus until ...
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...n the number of bus travellers over took by the train passengers, which was the l...
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Suggestion: It
...red mode of transport from 1970 to 2010.It is anticipated that following years peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77108433735 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83401564055 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3456461338 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111896972065 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569272158658 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402020864176 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818039778587 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363145027487 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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