Some people think that air travel should grow without a limit,while others believe that Governments should limit it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The use of air transportation modes for various purposes have been increased in recent decades.Some are of the opinion that this trend should be encouraged,while others suggest that the Government should take necessary steps to control the use of it. I believe that the over use of air transport system brings many negative impacts to our natural eco-system.
On the one hand, increased air transports enhance the growth of international trades among nations.This helps to improve the economy of a country by exporting their products across the world.For example, the country like China exports their products to different parts of the world,it improves their economic status dramatically.Since the number of air transport modes increased the trade between countries are also become more strong than ever before.
On the other hand,despite its benefits, it has created numerous problems.Firstly increased use of air modes produce large amount of chemical gases that cause air pollution.Secondly, it needs large amount of gases and oils which are decreasing daily. For example, a recent study on natural resources reported that the amount of natural resources are declined by 50% as the air transport modes increased for two decades. Definitely , if the Government do not control this trend,it might destroy our natural resources and eco-system.
In conclusion, the number of air travel increased in last few years.Although it promotes the economical growth of nations,the drawbacks associated with it can not be ignored.Therefor,it is the government responsibility to limit the use of air travel to protect our eco system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49800796813 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32601236868 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.623465053 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.142857143 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8571428571 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168701841804 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828200386007 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620869766238 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110747518226 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059800127631 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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