Airways are the considered as the luxurious way of transport from the time of invention. It is also the quickest means of travel. However, it is of thought by many people that Governments must restrict this, while the rest believe that air travel should develop. I feel there are many benefits to the people with the growth of airways as the journey becomes easier.
To begin with, there are numerous advantages like airports will be constructed even in rural areas. So, people need not travel log in order to board the flight. For instance, trade and business will broaden and help to contribute to the overall economic development. Furthermore, cost of the airplane ticket will lessen and help everyone to travel comfortably and also with this growth, the traffic and pollution problems will decrease to a certain extent. Ultimately, it will help in providing new employment opportunities and also there is less danger of accidents as there is no traffic.
On the other hand, as the fare is high many people cannot afford it, instead, the government should take appropriate actions like introducing fast-moving trains and encouraging people to use public transport like buses. They should also provide free bus passes to children and students who travel regularly and help them reach on time. Next, the government must leverage high taxes on airplanes and audit the transport system every year.
In conclusion, if the airways develop, people can reach fast in time, travel safely with comfort and it also helps to build relationships with people. So, I believe there are many benefits than drawbacks with this way of growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nfortunately, there are many people who dont have any of these. Finally, I feel t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89667896679 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65625762666 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7119477374 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140281485022 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443935381885 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550011526755 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095036230894 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063039989181 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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