The graph below shows the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod University. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given polyline graph illustrates the information about various causes of two age groups for choosing Dorrifod University.
Overall, it is clear that bother groups preferred Dorrifod University because of proximity to their residential area. It can be noted that both age groups have similarities and differences for studying in university.
To begin with, 36% and 39%of students from 18-24 and above 25 age group enrolled in this University respectively for the closeness to home. It is interesting to note that the proportion of students of young age gave importance to industrial aspect is only 4% ;however, the equivalent figure for 25 years old is four times more than young ones. Course offered is primary reason for young ones who accounted for 35%which is 11 %more than adults.
Probing further, there are 9%of students aged between 18 to 24 who considered the opportunity to study abroad important as part of course, the portion of adults was only 3%. In respect of reputation of teaching staff 2%and 1%enroll from young age group and adulthood. Surprisingly, for facilities on campus, the figure of young ones is higher (14%)than adults (2%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17553191489 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80638922942 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0398517449 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137282107792 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652929636313 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711518300661 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113742756031 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849043823419 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.