In most of societies , the role of father and mother is different. What are the causes of this difference. What will NE parental role in future.
Due to stiff competition parental role is changing day by day. In majority of countries both parents play different roles. Plenty of reasons contribute in this trend. The parental role would be different in upcoming decades.
On the one that, ample of reasons role of father and mother is different from each other. The first reason of varying role in these old fashioned communities is illiteracy as absence of education facilities for women result in restricting the role of women only upto household works. Moreover, women are considered as machines for giving birth to children. However, earning bread and butter for running family is major responsibility of men. Therefore, it puts extra burden on shoulders of men as they have no other choice than working and earning money by burning mid night oil. Another reason is that in some nations, still women are living merely in the walls of home as some social barriers restrict them to work outside. Thus, they fail to divide the financial burden of men. Besides this, there is lack of awareness among people about role of female which is primary cause of slow progress of nation. For an instance, in most of developed nations women contribute equally which make country not only better place to live but also economically rich.
On the other hand, in upcoming decades there would be great changes in the role of parents. Firstly, people are now highly qualified as well as aware about role of both genders in society. As a result, western culture would be followed by everyone. To elaborate it, along with household chores they would work for financial contribution. Furthermore, they work with men in every field such as banking, medical and business etcetera. Therefore, working women would help in earning money for betterment of the family and for bright future of their offsprings. Secondly, some people move to overseas counties in seek of lucrative professions and women can easily take responsibility of family. Moreover, single parent family is popular now a days as both parents are working and they are not depend on each other for financial assistance. Additionally, in upcoming time the children would be independent as they will take all decisions on their own and parents will also allow children to take decisions themselves in order to develop decision making skills so that they can become able to take responsibility as they grow.
To conclude, although in some societies both play different roles and responsibilities are also different but in future the role would be almost Same and both genders would work for finance and for nurturing their offsprings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6834253424 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526436781609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8356783851 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8260869565 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.60869565217 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15721644636 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494307886258 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532691932327 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115908333019 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378709231999 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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