the graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the uk from 1990 to 2005

Essay topics:

the graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the uk from 1990 to 2005

The line chart gives information about the origins of atmosphere pollution in the uk between 1990 and 2005.

Overall, the emission derived from industry was the highest figure in the 1990-2005 period. Besides, while the transport had a increasing trend, the remaining sources decreased during the 1990-2005 period.

At the starting point in 1990, while the total air contaminants was at exactly 7 million tonnes, the highest figure was the industry, at approximately 5.5 million tonnes, which was higher than those of the transport and households, at 0.8 million tonnes. In 1996, The uk's residents witnessed a sharp decreasing trend of the air pollutants derived from industry, at precisely 3 million tonnes. Following the decrease of industry, the total air pollutants also speedy decreased to exactly 4 million tonnes in 1999. in the 1996-2005, the total atmosphere contaminants slightly decreased to 3.2 million tonnes, compared to the industry's figure in 2005, at exactly 2 million tonnes.

In additions, the figure of the transport's air pollutants was exactly 1 million tonnes in 1996 after a slight increase from 1990 to 1996, a slight different to the households' figure, at nearly 0.5 million tonnes in the same year. Although the number of the air pollutants from households grew up to 1999, the figure dropped to around 0.2 million tonnes in 2005. In contrast, 1 million tonnes of air contaminants discharged by transporting in 2005, a slight growth.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23829787234 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86698002576 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3942744964 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24965962106 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134006580985 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053244196556 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18559940289 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380226066672 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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