Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
People all around the world have carried out many campaigns to preserve wild animals, in which zoos are an outstanding topic to widely debate. Some opinions think that we should get rid of zoos because they are too cruel, however, some critics believe that zoos still have some positive influences on preventing wild animals from the brink of extinction. While zoos also have some disadvantages, I believe that they are necessary means to protect animals.
On the one hand, many people think that zoos should be eliminated for some reasons. Firstly, low levels of living conditions are inevitable in many zoos due to limited financial backgrounds. In many undeveloped countries, governments have to take other important issues into consideration such as crimes and poverty, and therefore, allocating more resources on improving better captivation systems is truly an unfeasible mission. Secondly, some zoos are found guilty of abusing miserable animals as revenue-generating instruments for illegal commercial purposes. We sometimes see some lions or tigers showing signs of exhaustion due to overworking live performances. Such news sometimes is carried out by news coverage and strongly convicted by the public.
On the other hand, I still think that zoos still are useful places to save wild species. Firstly, although man-made living conditions in zoos are not similar to the natural environment, animals may live in danger if they are allowed to settle down in the nature. There will always be many criminals who want to hunt wild animals for their fur or tusks to meet the demand of high-graded furniture. Secondly, many zoos have upgraded to safaris, in which living conditions seem to optimize and suit for animals’ well-being naturally. This trend also results in a new type of tourism, ecotourism, which helps people in charge have more revenue to maintain animals’ survival and ensure necessary conditions.
In conclusion, although it is obvious that many zoos nowadays are still quite cruel with poor living standards to animals, I believe they still benefit for conservation if we have some appropriate interventions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 677, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...verworking live performances. Such news sometimes is carried out by news coverage and strong...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35014836795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91832181944 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0733698516 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31154886223 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107212344722 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811603400575 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187511391774 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760628758794 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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