The bar chart compares four countries namely England, Wales, Scotland, Northen Ireland in term of female unemployment between 2013 and 2014.
It is clear that the numer of female unemployment in Scotland rose slightly from 2013 to 2014. In contrast, this figures in three countries fell rapidly.
In 2013, England had a highest propotion, with 6.8%. At the same time, Scotland stood at 6.1%, while this rate in Northen Ireland and Wales were lower, at 5.6% and 5.4% relatively.
In 2014, there was a large decrease in the number of female unemployment which fell to 4.6% in Northen Ireland. Similarly, this rate in England and Wales dropped slowly to 6.5% and 5.0% relatively. Howerver, this number jumped quickly to 6.7% in Scotland. Therefore, this countries had the highest rate in 2014.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... fell rapidly. In 2013, England had a highest propotion, with 6.8%. At the sa...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...quickly to 6.7% in Scotland. Therefore, this countries had the highest rate in 2014....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, then, therefore, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57701150316 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6688108436 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170140732196 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793425633765 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574945709392 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118028134339 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444527595461 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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