The graph below shows the number of Computer and Internet users in different Arab countries

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of Computer and Internet users in different Arab countries

The bar chart compares the number of people using computers and the Internet in nine different countries in the Arab World.
Overall, UAE and Kuwait were by far the most computerized countries among nine regions. In several countries (the UAE, Lebanon, Jordan, and Oman), there were more Internet users per thousand people than computers. However, in other countries, such as Kuwait, Saudi Arabia, and Syria, the number of Internet users was lower than the number of computers.
In UAE, approximately one-third of the population had access to the Internet, followed by 100 users in Kuwait and 80 in Lebanon respectively. The UAE had over 150 computers for every 1000 citizens, compared to 120 computers in Kuwait and 80 in Lebanon. The number of using computers in S. Arabia and Oman was negligible, with roughly 60 and 48 users, respectively while only less than 50 people got accessed to the Internet. However, people from Egypt, Morocco, and Syria seemed to refrain from connecting to the Internet and computer, resulting in the situation’s lowest number compared to that of others.

Votes
Average: 6.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12359550562 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74840280252 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5691618643 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298125645296 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14006284214 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988334113249 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242800068136 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847037163272 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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