The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The provided line graph illustrates information about how many people asked questions for the Tourist Information Office in one city in the first half of the year 2011.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of enquiries received directly and via telephone saw an upward trend, while letter or email had a reverse pattern. Also, it is noticeable that in January, the in-person enquiries were the least, but this figure climbed up and surpassed the others at the end of the period.

Looking at the graph in details, one can see that in the first three months, there was a fluctuation of questions by telephone. After that, it leveled off at 1000 before went up and reached the highest point at 1400 in June. As for in-person queries, the trend was similar. Starting at the lowest at just over 400, but then, the significant growth was recorded over the given period and peaked at roughly 1900 enquiries.

By contrast, letter or email went in the opposite direction. After remaining stable at around 700 from January to March, the queries experienced a sharp fall at under 400 in May, which equaled to the first month of in person, then the figure stayed constant until June.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79807692308 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44646829135 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6976026414 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201996424525 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070113073858 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810522155751 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124897358475 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928397629434 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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