The graph below shows the number of people with food allergies per quarter

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of people with food allergies per quarter.

The graph illustrates the amount of people who have some allergies caused for a group of food, split in a period of each three months. The units in the Y-axis are in Thousands.

Overall, People who had allergy by milk and eggs show a similar tendency over the four quarters, where in the last period looks an increase in the amount of people with allergy. Also, the graph shows that allergic people by Peanuts have the highest number of people in the first quarter while in the next three quarters People allergic by milk have the highest amount. All of the groups show an increase in the number of people in the last period.

Peanuts allergic people have over 30 thousand people in the first quarter. For the next two quarters, it shows a decreasing tendency where first it sharply decreases and then shows a slight fall to just over 5 thousand people. People allergic by milk start just under 25 thousand people and shows a gradual drop until over 15 thousand in the third quarter, and then it rebounds until it reaches over 20 thousand people in the fourth quarter.

People allergic by eggs and wheat gluten show a similar tendency. It remains stable over the fourth period in the band between 5 and 15 thousand with a peak in the second and fourth quarter. It is important to point out that people allergic by wheat gluten have the lowest amount of people in the first and fourth quarter (5 and just over 10 thousand respectively) while in the second and third quarters people allergic by peanuts have the lowest (7 and 6 respectively).

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62909090909 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31129172142 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.392727272727 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4787473818 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334043379143 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145530337363 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704103750889 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217894632218 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733892301858 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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