The graph below shows the percentage of part time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The information about the percentage of part-time workers in different country of the United Kingdom between 1980 and 2010 is illustrated in a bar chart.
Overall, the percentage of people who work in part-time in wales was most popular. However, others counterparts showed some changes.
In 1980, the figure for Wales' part-time workers was most common compared to others, being the highest level to around less than a third followed by England's ones. Meanwhile, the proportion of those in Northern Ireland and Scotland only took up with just under a fifth.
By 2010, The percentage of all countries had experiencing in upward trends, except Northern Ireland. the Wales' ones had to break a record as the highest percentage to approximately more than a third, while the part-time workers in Scotland had a significant incline to almost a fifth. When it came to Northern Ireland, the workers had accounting to considerably lowest proportion to just a minority.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...pward trends, except Northern Ireland. the Wales ones had to break a record as the...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'considerably the lowest'.
Suggestion: considerably the lowest
... Ireland, the workers had accounting to considerably lowest proportion to just a minority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89499556866 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7582327212 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237720417477 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105287943448 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102573550334 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166909223937 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111587106818 0.0819641961636 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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