The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph shows the proportion of elderly people aged 65 and over in three countries over a period of a century (1940 to 2040).
It is evident that the population of elderly people increases in these three countries. Japan is expected to experience the most dramatic changes in its population of elderly people.
In 1940, there were about 10% of elderly people in America, compares to about 7% and 5% respectively in Sweden and Japan. It is interesting to note that the population of people who are 65 or older in Japan remained below 5% until 2000. By contrast, the population of elderly people in Sweden and the USA rose gradually to about 15% in 2000.
Looking into the future, Japan will experience a significant increase in its population of elderly people, it is estimated that there will be about 27% by the end of the period. Sweden and USA will also increase slightly to about 25% and 23% in 2040 respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...g to note that the population of people who are 65 or older in Japan remained below 5% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77300613497 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67155197558 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509202453988 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1602556807 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254662830256 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121164916127 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140700163895 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186784512855 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167124948777 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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