The line graph shows the percentage of citizens over 65 years of age in three different countries with a projection from 1940 to 2040. Overall, there is an increasing trend, more prominent over the last decade, for all three countries.
For all the three countries, the numbers starts below 10%, with USA being highest amongst three with 9 percent in 1940. It increased from there for 40 years and reached 15%in 1980. From there on it roughly remained same for 40 years. From 2020 and on it increases again, more steeply in the last decrease reaching 23%.
The elderly population in Sweden was 6 percent, and showed a parallel trend to USA, it increased for 40 years and reached 14% in 1980. It decreased then, for one decade and became 13% in 1990. From this point it increased rapidly and overtaken USA in 2010 and became the first till 2030, and ended with 25 % in 2040.
Japan which was the least percentage of citizens in 1940 with 5% had a decreasing trend for almost 50 years. From 1990 at a level of 3%, it has begun to increase steadily, which boomed in the last two decades and ended up with the most populated country with to 27%.
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...eply in the last decrease reaching 23%. The elderly population in Sweden was 6 p...
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...ed rapidly and overtaken USA in 2010 and became the first till 2030, and ended wi...
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...ended up with the most populated country with to 27%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31620525165 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574879227053 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.850180365 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9090909091 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137248435887 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586132718903 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837485829679 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105289106614 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973396689237 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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