The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given line graph illustrates the ratio of population aged 65 and over in three countries (Japan, Sweden, USA) from 1940 to 2040.
It can be clearly seen that, overall, the percentage of people who liveaged 65 and over will rise almost two and a half times in 100 years.
Now turning to the details, in 1940 Japan with 5 percent stood on the third place while the USA with having about 9 percent of individuals aged over 64 stood on the first place and Sweden was in the between them. After 1940, the proportion of the USA and Sweden grew gradually just under 15% until 1980. Yet, conversely, Japan’s proportion was slow decline and eventually touched the lowest point in 1980 with approximately 3 percent.
After 1980, Japan’s proportion of the population over 64 will rise slightly until 2030 but predicated to jump nearly 27 percent in 2040 and catch the first place. On the other hand, the USA’s proportion was relatively stable for the period from 1980 to 2030. But in that period, Sweden passed through the USA about 1995 year. So, in the end, is expected for the USA 23% and Sweden 25% of individuals aged 65 and over in 2040.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...3% and Sweden 25% of individuals aged 65 and over in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66176470588 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49503062431 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.61760074 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25221488245 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109389323896 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998280279988 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173990729964 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109212871343 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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