The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The above graph illustrates the proportion of goods that carried via ( road, water, rail and pipeline) in UK from 1974 to 2002. The quantities are measured by million tones.

Looking from the overall perspective, road transportation was the most common method and on the other hand less amount of goods transported by pipelines.

In 1974, approximately 5 million dollars tones of goods were transported by using pipeline system and it was steadily increased up to 22 million tones by 2002. Railway transportation system started around 40 million tones although, it witnessed a reverse trend until 1995 and climbed up to 42 million tones eventually by 2002. 40 million tones of goods carried via water in 1974 and the amount was increased gradually and ended up peaking at around 68 million tones by 2002. However, we can comprehend that road system was the easiest method to transport goods. 70 million tones of goods were transported by using road system and the quantity rose up to 98 million tones by 2002.

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Average: 7.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99408284024 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74618693156 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8739951639 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235223384424 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125792480784 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474273617488 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181633903124 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201564211223 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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