The graph below shows Twitter use by age group in the USA between November 2010 and May 2013.
The line graph provides information about twitter usage by different age groups in America from november 2010 to May 2013. Overall, the proportion of people from 18 to 29 years old use twitter rose strongly. In addition, people aged 18 to 29 always used more twitter than other age groups.
On the tenth of november, the percentage of people at the age of 18 to 29 and 30 to 49 was initiated fourteenn percent and seven percent respectively. Subsequently, the percentage for the age from 18 to 29 used twitter rose gradually and reached a peak at 32% by the twelfth of August, while that for people from 30 to 49 years old just had some fluctuations and was at about 32% at the end.
Turning to the other two age groups, the proportion of people at the age of more than 65 used twitter peaked at approximately 6% and then dropped to five percent at the end, and that for people from 50 to 64 years old grew by around 7% over the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'twitter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'twitters'.
Suggestion: twitters
...rcentage for the age from 18 to 29 used twitter rose gradually and reached a peak at 32...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38857142857 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5583795892 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497142857143 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6353083737 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21231689756 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14009381909 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118429385494 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167787199812 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12621276516 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.