The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the three countries from 1990 to 2004

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the three countries from 1990 to 2004.

The depicted line graph enumerates the information about unemployment ratio in three respective countries between 1990 to 2004.

Overall, it is evident that the Uk and Japan had experienced a downward trend with some fluctuation over the time period, whereas in the USA it was upwards, albeit with some volatility.

To initiate, the most marked change had seen in Japan, gradually increase from a tiny portion in 1990 to approximately 5 percent in 1996, which later plummeted to just over 1 percent in 2004. Moreover, the figure for the UK had experienced a certain oscillation throughout the years, which obviously leads to the lowest trend over fourteen years.

Furthermore, the figure for the USA had faced a certain vacillation in the first four years. Likewise, it significantly rises in the following years, peaking from exactly 2 percent to around 6 percent in the year 2000. However, it slowly slumped in the remaining two years.

Votes
Average: 7 (20 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20779220779 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89672260586 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5595595829 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148709513277 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707212727468 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117800549731 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111349393026 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137268094859 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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