The graph below the unemployment rates in females in each country of The U.K in 2013 and 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below the unemployment rates in females in each country of The U.K in 2013 and 2014.

The column chart illustrates the information about that the females unemployment rates in four countries England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland of the U.K from 2013 to 2014.
A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that the figure for unemployment rates among females in Scotland were increased as compared to others three nation in last year.
It is commenced that, the unemployment rates in England were the highest in 2013 the rest of the others three countries which was 6.8% while, after one period later in the same nation the figure for unemployment rates of women was slightly decreased around 6.5% by 2014. Subsequently, in the U.K one nation in Wales in initially year the proportion of unemployment rates showed to the almost equal, which was minor higher than in 2014 at 5.0%.
In contrast, the number of unemployment rates among females in Scotland starting from the year just only 6.1% but, the rates of jobless was steadily acceleration in 2014 near by 6.7%. finally, the proportion of unemployment rates among women in Northern Ireland in 2013 accounted 5.6%. surprisingly, in the same nation the rates of unemployment reached to at least which was 4.0%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
...ustrates the information about that the females unemployment rates in four countries En...
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Suggestion: K
... Scotland and Northern Ireland of the U.K from 2013 to 2014. A quick look on gra...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...e increased as compared to others three nation in last year. It is commenced that, th...
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Suggestion: K
...nd 6.5% by 2014. Subsequently, in the U.K one nation in Wales in initially year t...
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Suggestion: nearby
...bless was steadily acceleration in 2014 near by 6.7%. finally, the proportion of unempl...
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Suggestion: Finally
...dily acceleration in 2014 near by 6.7%. finally, the proportion of unemployment rates a...
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Suggestion: Surprisingly
...orthern Ireland in 2013 accounted 5.6%. surprisingly, in the same nation the rates of unempl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, while, at least, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97989949749 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74136147761 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5564676575 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388158679257 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200536356088 0.103423049105 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639301368934 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256666629009 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053419862526 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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