Essay topics:
the graph gives information about consumption of energy in the USA for 10 years from 1980 until 2030. overall, petrol and oil increase from 35 to 50. while coal experience changed a rather up from 16 to 29. weals nuclear solar/ wind hydropower is maintain the same level.
recording to the data, in 1980 initially that the highest consumtion of petrol and oil which grow in four years, it achieved 46 quadrillion units. it was keeped up with coal and natural gas succeed the second highest of quadrillion units. in 2005 coal surged is 3 quadrillion units.
in additional, remarning sour such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower are not look like with another that went down 5 quadrillion unit. like wise the sour to maintain the same level.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
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recording to the data, in 1980 initially that the...
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...ears, it achieved 46 quadrillion units. it was keeped up with coal and natural gas...
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...he second highest of quadrillion units. in 2005 coal surged is 3 quadrillion units...
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...05 coal surged is 3 quadrillion units. in additional, remarning sour such as nucl...
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...ther that went down 5 quadrillion unit. like wise the sour to maintain the same leve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 392.0 965.302439024 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 80.0 196.424390244 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.99069756244 3.73543355544 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73575857853 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 106.607317073 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 113.4 283.868780488 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9044416887 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104526051054 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053245965514 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0190330346359 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774846332332 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00550761677962 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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