The graph on the right side describes the rainfall statistics for some country.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The graph shows the average rainfall in some country in the year 2004. It can be clearly seen that the rainfall in the months of July and October has the highest rainfall with an average of 60 and 65 mm respectively.
According to the graph, among the first six months of the year 2004, the months of January, May, and June have a steady trend with an average rainfall of 50 mm approximately. Whereas, the month of February has been recorded the lowest rainfall(38 mm) of the year. And, April has the average rainfall of 42 mm is followed with a slight decline of 2 mm the month of March.
In the contrast, the following six months of the year 2004 have shown a remarkable upward trend in the context of average rainfall as compared to the first six months. So, the peak of rainfall also falls in the month of October with an average of 65 mm. Moreover, the months of July and august have almost the same and highest average rainfall of 58 mm followed by October only. Whereas, September has shown the lowest rainfall ( 48 mm) in the second half of 2004. Furthermore, there has been seen a declining trend in November and December after a recorded peak in October. As the average rainfall in the month of November and December are 53 and 50 mm respectively.
To recapitulate, the first half has shown the lower rainfall average than the second half of the year 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...verage rainfall of 50 mm approximately. Whereas, the month of February has been recorde...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fall of 58 mm followed by October only. Whereas, September has shown the lowest rainfal...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... September has shown the lowest rainfall 48 mm in the second half of 2004. Furthe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, may, moreover, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50602409639 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52044430082 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401606425703 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3788339643 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900278812332 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508781449036 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469625381998 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759808676773 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035050252409 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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