The graph show changes in spending habit of people in UK between 1971 and 2001
The pie charts above show the number of UK people who switch over their spending activities in the past thirty years specifically from 1971 to 2001. It is measured in percentage. Overall, the precentages rose dramatically in cars, thus it had the highest increase. Instead, the percentage fell sharply in food. According to the data, in 1971, the number of people who chose food more than a quarter of the chart. This part had the highest member surely 44% from all of the participant who spent their habits. 22% came from cars part. Following with that, furniture and petrol had the same percentages approximately 9-10%. On the other side, restaurants had the amount 7%. Books obtained the lowest participant definitely 6%. Then in 2001, the top number was cars, it has been lees 7% to a half of the pie chart. Thus, it reached a high of percentage from 22% to 43%. In the same way, computers rose steadily 10% since 1971. Restaurant peaked at 14%, it increased 7%. Nevertheless, the proportion dropped slightly in furniture and petrol, it was around 1-2%. Similarly, 5% deriveration occured in books. Food hit a low of number 14% compared to the data in 1971.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... had the highest member surely 44% from all of the participant who spent their habits. 22%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, similarly, then, thus, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78109452736 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71568885666 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6439537774 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5294117647 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8235294118 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137030417698 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323260542859 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682823497708 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137030417698 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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