The graph shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories

Essay topics:

The graph shows the average time spent by four car manufacturers to produce vehicles at their US factories.

The line graph gives information about how much time four categories of factories in Britain manufactured transportation from 1998 to 1005.
In general, it can be seen that the amount of time General Motors spent on producing vehicles had a downward trend, while the rest of the manufacturers showed marked fluctuation.
At the beginning of the period, General Motors accounted for the highest figure for manufacturing a car, at 32 hours, and 4 hours more than Ford did. After three years, the average time to produce a car at the Ford plant significantly increased and outlooked the figure for General Motors, at 31 hours, but later decreased dramatically to 22 hours in 2005. From 2001 to 2005, numbers decreased considerably and reached 21 hours in the General Motor Company.
Both Honda and Toyota had the same patterns in 1998, at 22 hours for producing a car. The line for Honda went down until 1999, the opposite trend for Toyota. From 2001 to 2002, Honda and Toyota had a similar amount of time manufacturing vehicles, at 24 hours before going down, and fell to a low point of 20 hours in 2005.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but later decreased dramatically to 22 hours in 2005. From 2001 to 2005, number...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80104712042 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75616535531 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591623036649 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5615795838 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277674042845 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115905546334 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769253366383 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167557206275 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404737191474 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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