The graph shows the monthly changes in average temperatures in cities in New Zealand and Great Britain

Essay topics:

The graph shows the monthly changes in average temperatures in cities in New Zealand and Great Britain.

The chart provides the data about the monthly changes in average temperatures in two urban areas in New Zealand and two in Great Britain.

Overall, the weather in New Zealand is warmer than in the UK regardless of the season. According to the temperature scale, the seasons in these countries are reversed, which means that when it is winter in New Zealand, summer comes to the United Kingdom.

Specifically, January is the hottest month in both Auckland and Christchurch, with a daily maximum at 24 and 23 degrees, respectively. December is barely colder, recording nearly 22 and 21 degrees. Furthermore, the weather in Auckland is generally warmer, especially during the cold season from April to October.

By contrast, the UK has the highest temperature in July, with daily average 15 degrees in Edinburgh and 22 degrees in London, whereas the coldest month is January (about 6 degrees). Another cold month is December, with records of 7 degrees for both cities. Likewise, the average British temperatures are lower compared to New Zealand's, for instance, 7 degrees in December in contrast to 11-15 in July.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10928961749 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83387999216 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5730027767 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282463796503 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108272510707 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116057975808 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182969721665 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139040911252 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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