The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

This line chart illustrates information about the average amount of vistors at London underground station at every 1-hour a day from 6 a.m to 10 p.m.
It is clear that 8 o’clock and 18 o’clock are peak hours with the highest underground users in a day when people start a working day or come back home in the late afternoons.
The lowest number of citizens using underground is 100 at the early morning and 16 o’clock, however, dramatically increase to the highest peak at all with about 400 passengers after 2 hours. After that, this figure fall down to 180 people between 8 a.m and 10 a.m, compared to 125 visitors at 20 o’clock.
From this graph, the number of people who travel by underground is fluctuated from 10 a.m to 4 p.m. After considerably rise to approximately 300 passengers, this figure sharply decrease to the lowest peak at only 100 users. It also happens from 20 o’clock to the end when London inhabitants using underground increase to 160 but hit a low of 140 visitors at the end.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75418994413 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98496591855 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.162756735 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.2 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136468609298 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785864379671 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304572643941 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934707576443 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494388046166 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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