The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The given line graph compares data on the number of Underground Station of passengers in London from 6 am to 10 pm.
It can be seen that the highest number of people uses the Underground Station of London at 8 am, while the lowest one is 6 am and 4 pm.
According to the line graph, 100 people using the Underground station at 6 am this number increase substantially to the peak of 400 people at 8 am. After that, the figures for user decrease rapidly to approximately 200 passengers at 10 am before that rising gradually to 2 pm. However, the number of using the Underground Station of London drop again significantly to 100 passengers at 4 pm. From 4 pm to 6 pm, the number of users recovers suddenly, jumping back up to 380 people and then over 6 pm this number decline considerably and remaining above from 120 to 170 passengers at the end of during period.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4125 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.807912926 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4270565431 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351936313967 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229991864661 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141529571112 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31540176915 0.15604864568 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101091118371 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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