The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The given line chart illustrates the total number of passengers travelled from London underground station in a day from early morning 6.00 to till 10.00 in the night.

Overall, total number of people travelled by the underground station fluctuated throughout the day. In addition, the peak time of station is at 8.00 in the morning and 6.99 in the evening.

According to the line graph, rush in the station varies. In the early morning 6.00 and at evening 4.00 pm only 100 people are preferring to use underground station, which is the minimum number of passengers in whole day. But, as the time progresses, the number of passengers also increase and it reaches at the largest number of travellers at 8.00 am and 6.00 pm with 400 and 380 people respectively. In contrast, in the remaining time, the number of travellers fluctuate, whereas, in the afternoon time the number remains plateau state. But there will be sharp increase from 100 people to 380 passengers between 4.00 pm and 6.00 pm i, and thereby it fells down rapidly to 130 by 8.00 pm.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... and at evening 4.00 pm only 100 people are preferring to use underground station, which is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66526562741 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9601559445 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28604137084 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147494226251 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730336495228 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222013643313 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205300109962 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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