The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the passenger numbers of the Underground Station in London over the period given 7 hours. It can be seen that the highest number of people use the underground stations at 8:00 am and 6:00 pm. At 6:00 am around 100 passengers can be found. This number increases dramatically until 8:00 am when it peaked 400, then declines to 190 at 10:00. By observed, this process repeated in the period from 16:00 to 20:00 with similar data. Moreover, in the middle of the day, from 11:00 to 15:00, the number keeps fluctuating on an average of 200 passengers. Meanwhile, in the night, very few people use this kind of transport, which stay in the range from 120 to 180.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, then, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 551.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55371900826 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48616141183 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 283.868780488 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8501389339 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125918171623 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792772359611 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115144340834 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125918171623 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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