The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This graph shows underground station passenger numbers in London. The context included the number of passengers from 6 O’clock to 22 O’clock. This is my analyze in the following paragraphs.
On the graph only has information from 6:00 to 22:00, because this Underground Station is not open at all the day 24 hours. In 6:00, most of people have not get up from their bed yet, so it only 100. In 7:00 some people get up and preparing going to do their work. In 8:00, most of people are going to their company, it means most of people work time is start at between 8:30 to 9:00. Then in 10:00 is a low point. There are a little high peak between 12:00 to 14:00 because some people need have lunch back home or went to other place. This is a freedom time. In 16:00 is a lowest point and was soon arise in 18 O’clock. Many people leave their work and have their dinner. In 20:00 most people already at home and rarely people still work or party.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...phs. On the graph only has information from 6:00 to 22:00, because this Undergr...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... open at all the day 24 hours. In 6:00, most of people have not get up from their bed yet, so ...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...hours. In 6:00, most of people have not get up from their bed yet, so it only 100. ...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...paring going to do their work. In 8:00, most of people are going to their company, it means mo...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...le are going to their company, it means most of people work time is start at between 8:30 to 9...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'peaks'?
Suggestion: peaks
...is a low point. There are a little high peak between 12:00 to 14:00 because some peo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ce. This is a freedom time. In 16:00 is a lowest point and was soon arise in 18 O...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38202247191 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35746965491 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5926363977 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901210837488 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498836943433 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12173927548 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133889027114 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106241030752 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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