The plan below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
there are so many changes in future plans. this university has three parts in the present map present and it has only one part in future plans.
The middle part is a sports ground, The 25M pool has not any change. In the north the pool is the Gym and west the pool is changing room, east is seating, south this pool is reception.
The left part is outdoor courts and it will become a leisure pool. In the south, the leisure pool is changing room. Nearly the changing room is a sports shop. it will be made more convenient for students and staff.
In the east is also outdoor courts now and it will have become a sports hall and dance studios. In the south with a sports hall and dance studios are Cafe and changing room. Although it might make this place more squeeze but make this place has a more useful price. there are more features for students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or courts now and it will have become a sports hall and dance studios. In the south wi...
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... and dance studios. In the south with a sports hall and dance studios are Cafe and cha...
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...ake this place has a more useful price. there are more features for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32298136646 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98990546913 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8741275671 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 112.824112599 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854063096453 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358572495443 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038009076644 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508201182948 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249472270743 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 13.2329268293 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.85 8.06136585366 73% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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