The plans below shoq a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The plans below shoq a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

From 1920 to today, the Grange park has changed a lot. The location of the park is Arnold Avenue, and it never changes its place.

First of all, the park is rectangular, with five seats in 1920 and four today. Although these seats are less than before, they have been put together. In 1920, the seats were scattered on the edge.

There is a fountain in the center of the park. When people enter from the entrance, they will find it first. They will find a rose garden and four seats. The fountain water was moved to the southeast of the park, known as the water feature. The water feature is close to the children's play area. In 1920, there was no water feature, but a greenhouse.

In the northeast is the pool in 1920, it is a children's play area now. The nearest with pond for water plants is rose garden, now it's a café. Northwest rose garden is a unique thing without any change.

The stage of musicians hasn't really changed, because the amphitheater of the concert now functions the same as both.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...w. The nearest pond is rose garden, now its a café. Northwest rose garden is a uniq...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...ut any change. The stage of musicians hasnt really changed, because the amphitheate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46408839779 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24391025616 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.575491619 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.8666666667 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171989873475 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604412048969 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638589436398 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872354213799 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054985261089 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 13.2329268293 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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