The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layouts depict the plan of sport center and how it will be transformed after renovation. It is clear from the layouts that few structure will be removed completely, and several new items will be built such as Leisure pool, Dancing studio, and sports hall etc.
The main entrance of the university sport center is at the south, and will remain the same after redevelopment. Similarly, there will be no change at the reception location, central pool, seating area, and the changing room beside the central pool to the west.
The both outdoor courts will be demolished and several other facilities will be built. Firstly, while Gym will be made bigger, sports hall and two dance studios will be made available to the east of the central pool. Moreover, the west outdoor courts will be replaced by a Leisure pool. Two new changing rooms, one at the south-west corner and another one at south east corner, will be constructed in the sport center. Interestingly, a new sports shop and a cafe will added into the facility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun structure seems to be countable; consider using: 'few structures'.
Suggestion: few structures
...tion. It is clear from the layouts that few structure will be removed completely, and several...
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Line 9, column 469, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...ngly, a new sports shop and a cafe will added into the facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86931818182 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53363224549 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9256551253 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156975071879 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928762323729 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741958181876 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13075321733 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350364147238 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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