Being a celebrity – such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Famous personalities such as sports persons, film stars, politicians always enjoy the best opportunities and facilities in the society and the nation as well. However, they face few issues like privacy is compromised, need to maintain good get-ups every day and so on. I believe that being a celebrity brings more advantages compare to issues, and will explain in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, common people always aspire to become a celebrity, and they always respect their idols. As a result, a famous person always gets privilege in the society. For instance, people always give way to actors and sports persons, when they check-in in any hotel, restaurant or airport. Moreover, words of celebrities are taken very seriously in the society. Because of this, they get handsome offers from advertising agencies, media houses. Thus, famous personality can enjoy financial freedom.
However, famous persons are being followed by their fans and media houses, as a result their private life is compromised. If they make any wrong move, it gets highlighted in no time in news and social media. For instance, recently, Salman Khan- a renown Bollywood actor- made a comment which was provoking to other community. In no time, his comment was spread all across India, and he was trolled because of his words. Although it was unintentional, but his image was hampered in few seconds. Therefore, celebrities must choose their words carefully. Moreover, attires of film stars, sportsperson are followed by young generation. Hence, they have to maintain up to the mark and latest fashion every day, which is a costly affair.
To sum up, although celebrities face few issue like privacy is compromised, sometimes unwanted attention and costly life style, the benefits that they enjoy is much more superior than issue. In fact, financial freedom, media coverage and luxurious life are the dreams of every person, and a celebrity is lucky enough to enjoy these.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20504731861 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71855115005 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4071273941 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8421052632 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172887228923 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515412528494 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503385895378 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112321806685 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467482052554 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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