The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph illustrates the number of passengers going to Underground Station every day in London.
Overall, the number of people going to the Station reaches the peak at 8 o’clock and hits the lowest point two times a day, at 6 o’clock and 16 o’clock.
At 6 a.m, people start going to London Underground Station to go to work. Hence, the number of people going to the station hits the lowest point at 6 a.m, at 100 passengers, and significantly climbs to 400 people at 8 a.m. However, it dramatically decreases to just under 200 people at 10 o’clock. Then, during 4 hours, from 10 a.m to 2 p.m, the figure for passengers going to this destination gradually increases to just above 275 people at noon, then slowly go up to 300 people at 14 o’clock.
After 2 p.m, the passenger numbers significantly decline to 100 people at 4 p.m, then are rocketing dramatically to approximately 400 passengers. In the next 2 hours, the passenger figures fall down to just higher than 100 people. Moreover, the figure for passenger fluctuates for 2 next hours.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75135135135 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90966501075 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2227711875 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120643722096 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835723348936 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820805676254 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118600267598 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970834879813 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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