Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Nowadays, many people experience themselves into some challenging activities, such as hang-gliding or mountain climbing because the enjoyable activities of some people are these activities. I completely agree that this is an excellent trend due to the development of the economy.
Due to the development of society, people have more choices to relax after a long stressful time at workplace. Some people, who are interested in adventure, love some challenging games, such as hang-gliding or mountain climbing to relax, despite the danger of these activities. For example, some people, from the rich to the poor, create a community that is joined by plenty of people loving challenge themselves. However, these activities are hazardous. Some people injured themselves while they are playing these games. Hence, people should share their experience to other people, which can decline the danger of some challenging activities when they play these games.
Furthermore, this development is totally an excellent trend to improve the economy of some countries. Some countries are great places to take place these games because of the conditions there, such as mountains and weather. Taking Dubai is an example. People, especially the rich, go there to play these games due there are many suitable places to take place. Moreover, when people travel to Dubai to enjoy these activities, people usually buy some traditional stuff or some gifts for their friends or their family. Thus, people can have more job opportunities because of the improvement of the tourism. If the tourism of a country develops, the economy of that country will improve.
To sum up, I totally believe that the popularity of some extreme games, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing, is a good trend. Not only does the economy can go up if these activities are popular, but people, who are excited adventure, also have some excellent choices to relax after a long stressful time at their workplace.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27070063694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8104206875 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474522292994 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.581921735 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208382041065 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752571004741 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576170495526 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157450225086 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525174794483 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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