Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
In this modern world, there are many risk-takers who want to risk their life to involve in some intense activities. Some people think these people are rebellious and thoughtless due to the lack of knowledge or respect to their nurturers. However, participating in extreme activities does not mean you lay your life on the edge of death. This essay will display the reasons why people become risk-takers and the benefit of this trend.
Extreme activities are outdoor or indoor activities such as mountain climbing, skating, which require participants having a good health or a tough body. In order to take in it, they have to exercise completely to gain their power; hence, if people want to improve their health, joining into these activities is a suitable idea for them.
Moreover, some activities like kanyaking, mountain climbing require teamwork skills in order to support each other in any aspects of these sports; therefore, participants can enhance their solidary as well as expand their relationship, which is really helpful for their work and study.
Last but not least, intense sports not only help people stay alive but also give partipants a chance to discover nature, enjoy new landscapes that might never appear in daily life. For example, deep sea diving can open your eyes to a whole new world under the ocean.
Overall, these activities become more and more popular can create more exciting lifestyle for many people. It is opportunities for people push the boundaries out of the comfort zone and reach their highest potential
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10236220472 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59844905739 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0016233531 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284941015951 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105493166044 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702952375428 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137149605934 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102969653409 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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