The given line chart compares the percentages of unemployees in the US and Japan over a span of 6 years, from March 1993 to March 1999.
At a first glance, the US unemployment rate showed a significant decrease whereas the situation in Japan was the opposite, recording a slow increase of unemployees among the same period of time.
In 1993, just more than 7.0 % of US citizens had not a job, but after the number of job opportunities increased bringing to a reduced unemployment rate. Apart from some fluctuations, the US figure constantly decreased up to March of 1999 when the percentage of unemployed workers was just slightly over 4.0 per cent.
In sharp contrast to this, Japan at the beginning of this evaluation counted an highly reduced number of not working citizens, about 2.4 per cent, but next years the Japanese figure rose up to more than 4.5% overcoming the unemployment rate recorded in the US in March 1999 .
It’s interesting to note that there was a period of time between March 1998 and 1999 in which the 2 countries recorded the same exactly proportion of unemployments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...’s interesting to note that there was a period of time between March 1998 and 1999 in which th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8670212766 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8913329269 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6633210453 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439030146637 0.215688989381 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208847768019 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701483521766 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232696840296 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691342769713 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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