The graph shows the unemployment rates in the us and japan between march 1993 and march 1999.
The given line graphs illustrate information about the percentage of people who were unemployed in Japan and the US over a six year period from March 1993 to March 1999.
Overall, it can be seen that the US had much more unemployment rates than Japan for a considerable period, but in the end of the term, both nations reached the same proportion.
Looking at the details, as regards the US, the figure stood at 7%, the total being the peak level in March 1993. Despite being the highest rate, the percent dropped down steadily to just over 5% in the end of March 1995. For the remaining years, there was some fluctuations, finishing finally at 5%. With respect to Japan, the rate began at 2.5%, which was the by far the lowest total in March 1993. However, Japan experienced a gradual growth in the unemployment rate year on year. Unfortunately, the rate hit a peak at just over 5% in March 1998. Having reached a spike, there was then a steady drop in the amount to 5% in March 1999, which meant that the value was identical to that of the US.
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Essay evaluation report
The given line graphs illustrate information about
The given line graphs illustrate the information about
flaws:
some duplicated contents, look:
both nations reached the same proportion.
which meant that the value was identical to that of the US.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 192 200
No. of Characters: 822 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.281 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.423 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.409 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.433 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, look, so, then, as regards, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47916666667 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45930418682 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9297596442 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435571276978 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173534161143 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102559019128 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291326252376 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114278550877 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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