The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals trend in world population growth proportion between 1800 and 2100, while the second figure given predict urban proportion for the next 25 years.
Generally, global population experience exponential growth and then decline steadily in whole the period given. Between 1800 to 1950, the population grew slowly just under 1 billion to approximately 2,5 billion. Next, that this proportion rise rapidly to almost 8 billion in next nine decade, peaking them highest amount of all over the period shown. Next few decades followed gradual decline to, exactly 6 billion in 2100.
By considering second figure, while developing country’s figure goes on to highest proportion year by year, expected to remain unchanged at about 1,3 billion people over the next two decade.
It is interesting to note that developing regions desiring to rise all over the period step by step, developed regions want to maintain in exact figure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the highest'.
Suggestion: them the highest
... 8 billion in next nine decade, peaking them highest amount of all over the period shown. Ne...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...eveloping country's figure goes on to highest proportion year by year, expected to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2987012987 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66363604703 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3146619063 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113237180555 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532201275007 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064951381666 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719702333586 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729976066608 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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