Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improve the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
It is certain that food is one of the fundamental need for human life but a presence of modernization and using ultra-modern technology, people have invented the different way to prepare and consume foods. In this essay, I’m going to give specific details and thoughts about food and discuss the advantage and disadvantage.
First thought, preparing food was very cumbersome in the past but with the advancement, human knowledge and technologies, it has become easy to make food, saving our life time. For example, students and business person usually prepare their foods during their lunch time, not enough to make a delicious and qualified food. Fortunately, such technology and advancement have appeared, influencing people, busy, and students to make a tasteful food with almost no time. By this way, people can eat more good taste and qualified food and junk food would be avoided by themselves.
Second thought, however all technological devices, divert into human well-being, plays a significant role in modern world, there have been a lack that unqualified products have been producing, also leading people to eat raw food, pleasured as to saving time. As the result, people have been struggling diseases such as stomach and something. Let's take Mongolians as example, we have a non-official data that thousand to million people have been struggling such diseases.
In conclusion, it is appreciable to make qualified food, by using such devices. However, it is time that every single people concern about what they would eat, instead just deal with lunch as junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24803149606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80823490335 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7298793726 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.181818182 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156573199571 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694295303667 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037551553359 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1042151562 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426846134873 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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