The graphs below show the average monthly expenditure on children's sports and participation in different sports in UK from 2008 to 2014.
The first line graph represents the average expenses for every month on children's sporting activities (million pounds) and the second one depicts the number of children who took part in football, athletics and swimming in the United Kingdom in a period of six years from 2008 to 2014.
Overall, the monthly expenditure on children's sports increased steadily over the years and football was the most popular sport for children in the UK.
According to the first graph, in 2008, the figure of average expenditure was 20 million pounds for British children's sport actions which continually went up in the subsequent years. In 2014, the amount of money UK children spent on athletic pursuits reached to 30 million pounds.
Moving on the second graph, we can see that football was the most dominant sport in the three subjects with the towering figure of more than 8 million participants in 2008 and 9 millions in 2014 whereas it was only 1 and 2 million in swimming and athletics respectively in 2008. However, the popularity of swimming grew up and lasted to 2014, with roughly 3.8 million children's participation took this activity. With a dramatically upward trend, athletics also became the second common sport when children participated with approximately 5 millions. It is worth noting that more children participated in these sports in 2014 than in 2008, especially football.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17256637168 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7735846041 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3679263448 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.125 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399126287492 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194298121309 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738583378979 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26802270252 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236237792201 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.